Looks good, you could probably see hollywood, venice beach, rodeo drive etc. all in one day if you get up early. Its nice to see but you're not gonna spent that long there! Universal is about an hour drive from anahiem so you could add that in in your second day there? Or just base yourself in Newport/long beach where you can relax one day & see attractions the next?
You will spend a day in Alcatraz between getting tickets, the ferry & tour so may want more time there if you want to spend time shopping! Also, the wine country outside san fran are nice
Take the coast roads (takes a bit longer) instead of the motorways, you will pass through monterey, carmel, santa barbara & more. Again, all nice to see but you may find more excitemnt elsewhere.
if you wanted to revise anything i would suggest palm springs, vegas, pheonix. All are spectacular. you could see the grand canion, hoover dam, desert etc, etc
I absolutely love the west coast & you will never get to see everything but you will want to go back every year!!