I would always suggest the engagement a planning consultant or an architect to prepare your submission.
Submissions prepared by affected house owners often suffer to a greater or lesser degree from subjective and even emotional content. This is natural and not surprising, but it will not contribute positively to the owner's case.
A good consultant will assess all of the pertinent issues and assemble them into a logical and comprehensive submission.
They will prioritize the most critical issues,
Use the correct planning & development terms,
Spot potential issues the owner may not,
Review the proposals vis-à-vis the Development Plan and Rural Design Guidelines,
Raise any relevant concerns on waste disposal & water in relation to standards such as Building Regulations, EPA Guidelines, National Standards,
Will be able to assess any impact of overlooking & loss of privacy in a disinterested, technical manner, in contrast to a homeowner's own 'perceived' loss,
They should then prepare a report or comprehensive letter in a highly legible and accessible manner, with introduction, body issues and final conclusions. It is important to make the document as accessible as possible, even through its basic layout.
DBK100
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